- Absolutely loved it.
A great job from Paine's perspective. The story was adorable and stuck to both characters personalities, which is sometimes hard for a writer to manage.
The last sentance to close the story made me laugh xD
"Screw Yuna. We dont need her, afterall", I believe?
A cute statement, VERY suitable for Paine, and a lighthearted way to end the story.
I recommend putting this on Fanfiction.net ..., way more people will review on there.
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