Yuna has left the Gullwings to settle down with Tidus, so what are Rikku and Paine to do with their now-abundant free time? [RikkuxPaine] Rated R for sexual content. *YURI*
- Absolutely loved it.
A great job from Paine's perspective. The story was adorable and stuck to both characters personalities, which is sometimes hard for a writer to manage.
The last sentance to close the story made me laugh xD
"Screw Yuna. We dont need her, afterall", I believe?
A cute statement, VERY suitable for Paine, and a lighthearted way to end the story.
I recommend putting this on Fanfiction.net ..., way more people will review on there.
(#) A Shady Al Bhed thief. 2007-03-16 06:41:19 PMI would have to say that this is the very BEST fanfic I have read from Paine's point of view. You captured her perfectly! The sad thing about me is that I've read so many fanfics I didn't even need to translate a single al bhed phrase cuz I knew em all! LOL I need a life!
This was a great fic. Very intense. Kept me hooked. Would love to read more of it. What happens next?