- "Since 845, a large house stood on this site, when a religious centre for Cistercian monks was built."
Neat trick since the Order formed in 1098. We won't go into the misuse of titles. Such little things disrupt the flow of a story line.
Author's responseOk, ok. Thanks for pointing the things out for me. I am looking for a better beta, who is able to work fast enough.
That sentence looked great to me.
I take your review and use it to make the stories better, and less irritating for those who see those things.
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