In the Year 2017 AD, A Meteor the size of Cambodia came falling to Earth and collided with Antarctica, but instead of wiping out half of the planet and putting the other half in a million year wint...
(#) elizedward23 2006-11-17 12:02:37 PMWait, where's your story? I think you misplaced where to put the text. The two beginning paragraphs are good, but your writing style keeps changing from formal to informal, which is not good. I like the formal to start the story, but watch for "You see" and "should've" ; these slang terms are said by people and no one is talking. And it sounds more like Sci-fi than fantasy.