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The Misleading Introduction
3 reviewsBeing determined isn't always enough -- but it can be a start. Ledgends don't come popping out of the wood work -- unless you make them. Six new trainers begin their journeys, and they begin to rea...
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Made of Stone
(#) IWCT 2006-05-13
Okay, interesting point of view there, awssedae. However, puking in my head isn't going to help matters. It will not stop me from writing this story, or increase the size of your infantile brain.
It also sounds as if you have some severe homophobia. You should talk to someone about that, as it is probably contributing to this anger you have. As with most people with homophobia I suggest that you come to terms with the "closeted" you. You will feel much happier, and far more fulfilled should you do so.
Next time, however, might I ask that you attack the story, and not the fandom? Your review merely made you sound like an ignorant, narrow-minded facist. You tend to sound more intelligent when you can back up your irrational points of view with actual evidence, which I am certain that my story can provide for you, if you are so inclined to read it.
I will also point out that you vocabulary could be expanded. There are so many synonyms for the word "gay" and as you used it at least four times in your review it was repetative, and dull. Synonyms add to your writing, and make your flames harsher for the author to read.
Oh, and people would probably take you more seriously if you capitalized the word "I" the way most of us were taught to do in elementary school. Of course, I completely understand if you have not passed primary school yet, and therefore will make an allowance.
You also spelled "would" wrong. However, it is one of those tricky words, and I will not hold it against you.
Thank you for the entertaining, if rather pointless, and obviously ignorant review.
PS. If you need help with any of the long words in this response do feel free to drop me a line.
=^.^= IWCTMade of Stone
(#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-31
Just like to say, your response to that flame was one of the funniest things I have read today :) I know it was ages ago, but still, go you :)
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