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• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) banner 2006-11-18

  I'm so terrified of Bellatrix - even as a little girl. By the way, I'm pretty sure that Rookwood is going to be a Marked Auror soon. He's probably going to be the biggest single danger.
  I wonder if Snape can be pulled from the Dark side, at least into neutrality, if we befriend him early? God knows he's brilliant, courageous, and tough. He'd be a helluvan asset if he wasn't such an embittered jerk...

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) matthiasblack 2006-11-18

  I like where this story is going doc and will enjoy reading more of it. Good luck with this and your other fics.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) JBern 2006-11-18

  Interesting to see where Harry goes with this. I wonder who you will pair him up with. Narcissa is an interesting possibility. Bella seems like a stretch.~Jim

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-18

  Outstanding chapter. This just rose to my favorite of all of your stories. I'm absolutely loving how innovative it is.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Jimm 2006-11-18

  Still, good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Especially with the Romance genre you've tagged it with. :-)

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) cj_cold 2006-11-18

  Nice story.
  
  Do wonder who will Harry be paired with. Hopefully not his mother. Narcissa seems to be an option, she was intimidated enough that she might not be as sure of her future as Bellatrix. Bella is out as she is already a die hard DE. Alice Longbottom(no idea for maiden name) would be the right general age.
  
  Wonder what Harry will do about Pettigrew, don't see him allowing him to hang with the group?
  
  Can't wait to see who all he 'meets' at Hogwarts. A few of the teachers will be very different, and the others will be younger.
  
  Is Harry going to use any of his other knowledge of the future? He could make a personal fortune off investing in the muggle world. Right now he is only second son of the Potters and will not have all the wealth, although I'm sure they will provide something for him.
  Investing will give him the resources to accomplish some of the changes to the wizardind world that he wants.
  Especially in the future(80s) when the computer companies and electronic companies start-up. Getting in early with companies like Sony, IBM, Apple, Microsoft(Or Even Auto companies like Toyota and Honda that didn't become huge until the 80's.) he could easily make a huge fortune with only a little start up capitol that his family would probably provide.
  
  More soon please.

  Author's response

  Alice will be about a Fifth year in this story. Hermione already thought out Harry's investments for him, with variations depending on when he gets his hands on money. As for Peter, and other First year house assignments (for the other reviews who asked), Harry will have a talk with the Sorting Hat.
  
  Bellatrix. Die-hard. -- Beavis & Butthead laugh.
  
  "T"

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-11-18

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens when they go to Ollivanders. This story is so cool. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

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  (#) smargden_2005 2006-11-18

  Hello again , Good to read yor writing,
  Tha sad thing is - when the chapter ends and I know I have to await LOTS of days.
  This story brings in new ideas, loking forward to se you bend them.
  I'm also "in history" with my own bitt of story, and I come to the point that if peaple is in to places at the same time post-owl's get in trouble. :-)
  In my story Harry-in his present body gos back - temporary.
  So I do think of "timelines".
  And in this - I do think "Harry" neads tp be born, by his righ James and Lily. Oterways "he" wil NOT be.
  And by the way. At teh point of preformence of the ritual : that would have "ENDED" all things of it, like tinning out in some fog. ( In my thoughts - that is the way. ) All is tp be re-done, If not - are there TWO different place of univerc - idf so Harrys OLD friends remain and all bad is still there, and the timetravel is - of no use - for the peaple left.
  But let us know - or - we know that the old timeline went out.
  And now - just awaiting for the next.
  /Bill

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  (#) Gioia 2006-11-18

  I don't know when I've been this excited about a story. As I mentioned before, I'm loving your creative, utterly unique storyline! This is all so wonderfully new!

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  (#) ChiVayne 2006-11-18

  I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter

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