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Space Pirates
(#) Redsliver 2006-11-15
Its small and quick, but I liked it. There wasn't enough information or dialogue to get to know the characters, however as its only the beginning there couldn't be. You should continue this, I can only see it getting better.Space Pirates
(#) RenoTurk 2006-12-12
Hey this shows promise. I will give you a little hint that someone gave to me as really I understood what they meant. Space out the work and make it a little smoother to read. It really does make a difference. Good luck!
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