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• The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-19

  Very good chapter. I especially liked your mention of Cho and how you'll be using her in the future. There's so much to look forward to in this story, it's hard to focus on any one thing. I also like how quickly the year has been moving.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! Yes, I have plans for Cho. She will certainly be a catalyst down the line. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I try to keep a good pace to the whole story, and there's still quite a ways to go.

• The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

  (#) matthiasblack 2006-11-20

  Excellent way for Harry to meet Cho and lovely interaction with Padma as well. This story is shaping up quite nicely and I hope you will see it to the end as I would read it there.

  Author's response

  I definitely will be at least finishing the year, my plans go way past that and hopefully I can show it. Thanks for reviewing, Cho will slowly become more apparent in the story and I love Padma so I try to feed her some lines here and there. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

• The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

  (#) paulblay 2009-07-16

  You know, paper falls a lot slower than glass balls (air friction).

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