(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-20So I printed this chapter out and read it on the bus after classes. Can´t say I´ve ever experienced a more entertaining bus ride.
Kudos for the following:
a) "... but there wasn´t any more bed to roll onto." -> ha ha, dude
b) ""Mom, hurry! Spence might start playing Super Mario Smash Bros. without me!" -> aaawww!
c) ""Joe, you owe me $5," -> bets and sex mingle like Pete Wentz and nude pics
d) ""Wanna bet?"" -> bets and sex mingle like Patrick Stump and future nude pics
e) HA HA! I totally fell for the whole DDR-"sex" scene. You (Pa)trickster had me completely fooled because they were making-out hardcore on the couch earlier. ;)
I´m SO glad you updated! :) And now, update again!!!
Author's responseThanks for the awesome review, yo. I was having doubts about posting this chapter because I had an insane case of writer's block this past week. (the whole falling out of bed scene was sitting around in Microsoft Word for a while.)
Expect another update in a few days. I have A LOT of ideas.
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