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Kicked Out
1 reviewA young girl, Gracie Waltons and her sister Anna are seperated by their Mother who is shocked to find out news that no parent ever wants to find out. Being kicked out is usually a fairly big deal a...
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Kicked Out
(#) syphonycometh 2006-11-21
I gave you the ambience rank thingy. No clue if you remember who I am, but I'm the guy who made Symphony and hasn't been here in forever. Now as for the review:
Imagine what a couple of months does for a person! Why can't everyone elses stories have your kind of flow? Seriously, it was comfortable reading and a tad bit on the depressing side. The grammar is a 300% improvement from your last story I read. I could rant on, but saying good job with the story may suffice. Keep it up.Author's response
Ofcourse I remember you =] It was you who said that my grammar needed improvement and i'm glad to hear from you that mines improved since last. I plan on writing more and seperating it between the two sisters.
I'm having fun with this xD I actually wrote it because I was grounded and a bit to much energy. Like I said i'm having fun =]
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