The next morning...
- okay that, was awesome. lol. ooo burn on jay. and i think you could easily make this an A/T, you're building them up quite nicely and at a good pace. maybe add in some more conflict with atlanta, some more jay hating, it's all good. and ya, i decided to stick around and review more, rather than writing. so write another chapter so i can review that too lol. but seriously, really looking forward to it, the tension in the story is so palpable and so well written, i can't wait. patiently biting my nails in anticipation till then m'dear.
- I absolutely,positively LOVE, yes I said it...LOVE this story! OH please continue! It was exactly this story that INSPIRED me to create an account on ficwad and start writting! So please continue! The suspense is eating inside me and devouring me bit by bit until you update! coughs Sorry, losing control of my emotions there...didn;t mean to sound pushy. Anyways awesome story, loved how the plot is morphing, and I really hope you won't abandon this story. Its already placed in my fav pics so far. Continue the great work! (oh, I can tell in you're writing the amount of effort that you displayed.