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The Order of Founders

The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, Harry stakes his claims.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Dumbledore, Flitwick, Harry, James, Lily, Lupin, Sirius, Snape, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/11/22 - Updated: 2006/11/22 - 3518 words

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  (#) Toto 2006-11-22 05:04:02 AM

  Ok, too bad for the Mcgregor, as he is a wonderful fanfic author, though he also seems to have disappeared lately. To hoping his healther is good.
  
  Anyway, this is good, but i'd like to see for once a WW where muggle born are hated because they are more able.

  Author's response

  As in my story 'Protection of the Stag'?
  
  "T"

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  (#) Shaggy37 2006-11-22 06:06:28 AM

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I hope Harry doesn't end up marrying his mom that would be kinda creepy. Are you gonna go through all 7 years and after with this story? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

  Author's response

  Sorry, one year only. 17 chapters.
  
  "T"

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  (#) banner 2006-11-22 06:07:07 AM

  This story is well-thought-out, and I like this Harry. He's mature as well as strong. It's kinda nifty watching him NOT pair off with some girl right away, too.
  Why hurry a pairing? I'm more interested in watching this generation grow into the characters we know.

  Author's response

  Because I'm a romantic at heart?
  
  "T"

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  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-11-22 08:46:25 AM

  Nice. I loved Harry's put down of Dumbledore. And having someone else come up with the merrit league was good; this isn't a one man fight.
  
  Thanks for writing. Looking forward to more!
  
  Tom A.

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  (#) matthiasblack 2006-11-22 09:37:23 AM

  Hooray, another chapter. The thought put into this was good and I like to see someone thinking things out. Congrats on the excellent chapter and I hope to see more soon.

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  (#) ChiVayne 2006-11-22 12:47:00 PM

  Nicely done. Any you going to have any matchups?

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-11-22 05:55:14 PM

  Another brilliant chapter! I love this fic. I can't wait to see who Harry is paired with eventially.

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  (#) selenepotter 2006-11-22 06:43:20 PM

  Great chapter!
  Nice use of Luna's mom!
  
  Now that I know this fic is only covering a year, 'ships seem a little silly for 11-year-olds.
  But if Harry can't be Luna's dad, maybe her could saw something to her mom that saves her life years down the road.

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  (#) Dragen 2006-11-28 07:38:31 AM

  What another great chapter, but you got the dat wrong, its meant to be 1971, not 1991.
  
  I like the new group that is starting up, this should make the wizarding world better.

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  (#) pstibbons 2006-12-23 12:46:08 AM

  very nice story so far --- I realize it's going to be ages till Hermione's born, but can I request in advance that Harry ensure that she has a less lonely childhood than she had in canon?
  
  The Meritocracy badges and the letter were great. It's nice to see some subtlety in a superHarry story.
  
  Peter in Ravenclaw? not Hufflepuff?

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