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The Girl

by Lines 1 Reviews

Eyes meet across a room, and, zap, a connection is made. But not today.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/23 - Updated: 2006/11/23 - 180 words - Complete

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  • The Girl

    (#) The_Wingless_Raven 2006-11-24 10:10:55 PM

    Absolutely stunning, just like before. The only thing I can think of to say is to turn it into an actual story and use a lot of detail. Other than that? There's really nothing left that can be said... It's so perfect... Oh, I'm still (slowly) working on that story based off of this poem.

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