Shonen Ai: ChasexOmi. Drabble. The title says it all, it starts out with a cupcake and ends in a kiss.
(#) Raven Stone 2007-02-22 04:24:10 PMI am in LOVE with Chase Yougn and that is just Gay!!!,that you made Omi kiss Chase like that! Who ever made Omi so that is soo Fucking STUPID!!!!!!!!!!
So you can see that I Hated it!!!!
Author's responsesnort ... covers mouth Ahh...heh heh... Raven Stone, right? Nice to know you’re too chicken to sign in. ^-^ Chicken shits never get far. Anyway, I think you need to sit down and take some calming breaths. Then perhaps go see a psychiatrist. ^-^ Yep, sounds good to me because if your THIS upset by someone writing FANFICTION for a CARTOON you have some serious problems. And I'd hate to break it to you, but so much for LOVing Chase Young, first off he's just a cartoon character. That's kind of sad that this love of yours is two-dimensional and only appears on paper. Second off, if you love him so much, you really need to learn how to SPELL HIS NAME RIGHT. snort So much for the world of fandom, when fans can't even spell their favorite character's names. Come back to me when you have a shred of intelligence.
Furthermore, had you actually READ this fanfiction you would have seen that Omi didn't "kiss Chase like that!" I believe Chase was the one doing the kissing. If not, please READ IT THIS TIME and correct me if I'm wrong, though I'd like to think that I know what I'm writing.
Now then, as much as I loved your poor spelling, atrocious grammar, and egregious incomplete thoughts I think I will get on with my life and wait for someone to critique my writing technique as apposed to my content, if that is in fact what you intended to do. Though you might want to rethink your approach. All I saw was a whole lot of babble that meant nothing.
If you ever feel like getting back to me on this, you know, to attempt to regain SOME of your dignity, please email me at ikysan (at) yahoo (dot) com. I would love to continue this conversation.