by The_Wingless_Raven 3 reviewsI wrote this based on my past with one of my best friends... although he turned his back on me I'll continue to love him as a friend. Sweet little free verse poem.
Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy - Published: 2006-11-24 - Updated: 2006-11-25 - 163 words - Complete
-1Boring
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(#) GR21 2006-12-04
i feel like a little kid again reading this it's realistic
(oh and the response to the review about getting ribs removed is something that would fit them perfectly)
Again, your exaggerated sense of self-importance takes away from this poem. You have twisted it to be about you instead of the person it was meant for. If you could see beyond your own arrogance, you might make a mediocre writer. Please, feel free to respond and prove that you are not completely self-absorbed.
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