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(#) KarmasMessenger 2006-12-07Again, your exaggerated sense of self-importance takes away from this poem. You have twisted it to be about you instead of the person it was meant for. If you could see beyond your own arrogance, you might make a mediocre writer. Please, feel free to respond and prove that you are not completely self-absorbed.
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