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Childhood

I wrote this based on my past with one of my best friends... although he turned his back on me I'll continue to love him as a friend. Sweet little free verse poem.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/24 - Updated: 2006/11/25 - 163 words - Complete

Reviews

• Childhood

  (#) PARCD 2006-11-25 08:45:44 AM

  He turned his back on you because he came to his senses and saw what a fucking pathetic person you are. How long did it take him? A week? If it was over a year, then the guy was just blind and stupid. In that case, you should have dated him. You deserve each other. Because, you're so blind you can't see what's in front of your fucking face: you.suck.ass.
  
  Oh, and what kind of dicktard name is Jeremy anyway? Sounds like a faggot to me. Wow, you two really belong together. Send me a invitation to the wedding if you make up... so, I can poison the cake.

  Author's response

  You're a fucking idiot and don't know a Ra-damned thing about anything. Go get a couple ribs removed so you can give yourself oral, that's the only way you're ever gona get some.

• Childhood

  (#) GR21 2006-12-04 07:59:36 PM

  i feel like a little kid again reading this it's realistic
  (oh and the response to the review about getting ribs removed is something that would fit them perfectly)

• Childhood

  (#) KarmasMessenger 2006-12-07 03:13:37 PM

  Again, your exaggerated sense of self-importance takes away from this poem. You have twisted it to be about you instead of the person it was meant for. If you could see beyond your own arrogance, you might make a mediocre writer. Please, feel free to respond and prove that you are not completely self-absorbed.

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