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Death

by The_Wingless_Raven 4 Reviews

This is the story about how death can in fact be our friend...

Category: Mystery - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/24 - Updated: 2006/11/25 - 437 words - Complete

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  • Death

    (#) PARCD 2006-11-25 08:36:05 AM

    Wow, congradulations. You win the Author-That-Brought-Me-Closest-To-Vomiting Award!

    Don't feel so flattered, I'm sure you'll win a lot more awards like this in your lifetime. Hopefully, you don't become a writer when you grow up. Wait... on second thought, you should.

    Then, everyone will hate your books so much that they'll reject you over and over again and you'll be an old lady with rotten teeth by the time you're accepted... if you're ever accepted.

    Wait, you're not already an old lady with rotten teeth, are you? It surely wouldn't surprise me.

    Have a good time masturbating over horse shit in a dark alley, smoking crack and watching porn videos on your computer.
  • Death

    (#) water_dragon 2006-11-25 07:40:39 PM

    i applaud your magnificent work applauds they really are very good

    Author's response

    Thank you, it's nice to get ACTUAL feedback on my stories, rather than soem assinine flamer raging at me without even reading the stories and poems they're flaming!
  • Death

    (#) GR21 2006-12-04 06:26:00 PM

    that was a beautiful stoey cries you should make it into a poem. again that was beautiful i really loved it.
  • Death

    (#) MushroomCap 2008-06-14 08:30:41 PM

    very insightful. you win the author-that-inspired-me-for-the-day award.

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