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Love
3 ReviewsAnother angsty love poem
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Love
(#) PCRA 2006-11-25 08:01:23 AM
How the hell do you know what love is? I bet you've never felt love before in your whole life.... unless it was for your own mom. Or, did she abandon you?
Has anyone ever told you that it's better to love than not to love at all? Well, I hope you fall in love.... so, you can get your heart broken and cry.
Have you even ever had a boyfriend? Probably not, and if you did, he probably looked like a cross between a dog's butt and elephant snot. But, then again, you probably would think that kind of thing is sexy, wouldn't you?
I bet you have REALLY bad taste. But then again, your parents probably had really bad taste too... or, they're just so fucked up they can't even make a half-decent baby. What do you look like anyway, a cross between a monkey's tummy and a cow? Sure sounds like it.
Love ya, bitch!Author's response
Yes, I've had a boyfriend. And the "cross between a dog's butt and elephant snot" remark is very suspicious. Such detail! Did you have to look at yourself in the mirror for inspiration?
You're pathetic. -
Love
(#) ArwenUndomiel 2006-11-25 08:12:19 PM
Wow, that is just really beautiful. I noticed a few typos , so you might want to proof-read it. Still, your writing style is beautiful and the ambiance of this piece was just fantastic.
By the way, don't listen to that flamer. I laughed my ass off reading all the 'reviews' they'd left you. They're just tragic!
This is wonderful.Author's response
Thank you for pointing out the typos. I wrote this a long time ago without spell check and posted it on another website. I only copied and pasted it over to this website. I'll fix the typos in the next couple days. And yes, the flamer is rather pathetic aren't they? Seeing as they don't seem to have anything better to do with their time other than flame me. And they tell ME that I need a life!