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Breaking the Seals

by Thor_Nairda 5 Reviews

Harry and Neville go to see Dumbledore

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy - Characters: Blaise Zabini, Harry - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/11/27 - Updated: 2006/11/27 - 7191 words


  • Shadow Play

    (#) hga 2006-12-01 08:52:34 PM

    This story has ... possibilities---for one thing, it kept my interest through these first seven chapters. But it has one terrible fault: no dramatic tension at all. Harry is just too damned powerful in too many ways, he and Dumbledore/the OotP don't seem to be hiding anything big from each other, Harry has many girls throwing themselves at him ... what is there to compell the reader to turn to the next page?
  • Shadow Play

    (#) Anaknisatanas 2006-12-07 10:02:18 PM

    Good story. Hope you update soon. I want to see what happens next.
  • Shadow Play

    (#) Cogster 2006-12-14 08:52:15 PM

    was watching this story on but at least you found a place that won't remove your chapters. hope to see some more up soon!
  • Shadow Play

    (#) jedielfsorcerer 2007-08-25 08:24:18 PM

    interesting story. keep it up. ever thought of harry learning how to do shadow meld\walk when he is 5 years old? plus some other shadow stuff. that would be very intersting.
  • Shadow Play

    (#) growlerlight 2010-12-21 01:15:30 PM

    I like this story. any more available.

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