Not Quite Believing....
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-28 11:55:04 AMWow. I was not prepared to learn Pete´s married with a kid. Glad she ditched that creep Michael. Relationships must be hard to maintain when you´re working together. And when the one is a creep.
Author's responseWhere's the question marks??
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-28 12:06:26 PMWow? I was not prepared to learn Pete´s married with a kid? Glad she ditched that creep Michael? Relationships must be hard to maintain when you´re working together? And when the one is a creep?
Author's responseSee that was much better.
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-29 06:18:33 PMthis plot line is amazing. it's addictive and exciting (wait...don't they make a rating point for that?) and insightful. damn ficwad for limiting my point-giving abilities.
anyway. do you want me to point out why i loved this chapter?
1.) starting it with pete flatlining. she has to save him, even though the other doctors suggest against it. and she's willing him to live. the emotion in that is remarkable.
2.) showing michael as the douchebag he is. i hate that guy. i think someone should drop a dime on him to his wifey. where's joe's big mouth when you need it? seriously.
3.) was bea having a flashback or was she daydreaming? that confused me a little, but i loved it nonetheless.
4.) he has a wife and a baby! this bea character has bad luck in the men department. why wouldn't pete's mom and dad say something? what arseholes.
now that i've caught up on my reading...i'm going to be begging you for two separate updates from now on. i love you, katy.
Author's responseBea was having a flashback, a kinky one at that. as regards number 2, patience.....LOL you said arseholes, so British! I love you sweets!