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Ch 11
9 Reviewsso... flashbacks, anyone?
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(#) moocow 2006-11-30 07:48:23 PM
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i want creepy air fucking.
XD
that is the random thought that made me start giggling half way through my biology exam monday. thanks a lot.Author's response
haha.
seriously, could you imagine doing that and then suddenly you just slide right on through...
blah. ok i dont wanna think about it.
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(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-01 01:58:16 AM
Alright, it's about 11 AM here in Austria and this is Alex, having rushed to the computer lab in-between her two lectures, to reward herself with this little goody. (Not that she actually deserves a reward for having yawned through most of the first lecture and even sneaked out to go to the restroom halfway through it.)
You've proven you've got a very attractive and addictive sense of humor in the course of the previous chapters but now you've also convinced me that you have some damn fine (serious) writing skills in you.
puts hand in her pocket, pulls out a rating point and slams it onto chapter
The flashback scene was neatly connected to what was going on in the present. I loved it. :)
Drop out of school* and update soon! ;)
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(#) raychmop 2006-12-01 10:57:00 AM
yay! updates! but wow, this chapter was awesome. cool plot twistedness. -
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(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-01 05:35:25 PM
i wonder why that happening to her...could it be peter? -
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(#) someone 2006-12-01 06:08:01 PM
by far this is my favorite story ever it mixes my two fav,. things fob and the supernatural kepp writing and hurry cause im getting anxious -
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(#) me and only me 2006-12-08 07:11:53 PM
please write more my all time fav story and im dieing for more