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The Reaper
2 Reviewsmy first attempt at writing a poem here. probably not good but please tell me what you think. it is a short poem about the reper's job.
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The Reaper
(#) -Chy- 2006-11-30 09:43:35 PM
I liked it, for a first attempt it was good. its creepy, good job :D -
The Reaper
(#) The_Wingless_Raven 2006-12-05 03:24:29 AM
Needs a bit of tweaking... Very nice idea, but a bit repeatitive and needs a bit more work.
Looks kinda like how I used to write when I was several years younger.
It was nice though. Oh, and yes, I did like it.
Thank you for al your reviews, you really cheered me up. =)
~The Wingless Raven