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End of the School Year

The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the end of term.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Harry, James, Lily, Lupin, Peter, Sirius, Snape - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/12/01 - Updated: 2006/12/01 - 3486 words

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  (#) JVTazz 2006-12-01 05:22:02 AM

  good chapter, looking forward to summer and yr 2 :)

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  (#) Toto 2006-12-01 06:18:37 AM

  Hum, i like it, but i still am wary about the muggleborn come from squibs theory, and i was wondering why nobody is second or fifth in the class order...

  Author's response

  Becasue they aren't the only good students in class? And they are in many slots, including 2 & 5 in various classes.

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  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-12-01 06:47:10 AM

  I love the way Harry's poking the government to change.
  
  The 3 islands sound interesting. hope theres more on that.
  
  Hmm, early 70's; summer of love (yes I know he's just 12. :-)
  
  Thank you for writing this. Very enjoyable.
  
  Tom A.

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  (#) sparky40sw 2006-12-01 06:59:32 AM

  love the way Harry Manipulates - no real pressure, just offers opportunities based on careful study of character (and knowledge brought back)
  fine work - and a very enjoyable read
  thanks

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-01 08:42:09 AM

  Great update, I really liked Harry's conversation with Sev and Peter.
  
  I've got the same problems with columns on this site, mainly because when I try to upload things in HTML format, the apostrophe always comes out as some bizarre character.
  
  Sorry about that, one of my soap boxes.

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  (#) Shaggy37 2006-12-01 10:33:01 AM

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! You brought up a very valid point with your Author Note at the end of the chapter, I agree with you. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-12-01 10:34:39 AM

  An awesome story! I loved the proposal and Ellen's mom's reaction to the marriage comment.

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  (#) Lord_Phoenyx 2006-12-01 10:47:16 AM

  Great Chapter. as for the thing with the journal. if they could fit a basilisk in the toilet pipe, one measly journal doesn't even compare.

  Author's response

  The basilisk moves through the draining pipes, not the sewer pipes, and I don't think it could come out of the toilet. If you do, that's fine. I don't.
  
  "T"

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  (#) JBern 2006-12-01 11:00:30 AM

  Nice continuing chapter. It's interesting to see Harry 'interacting' with Hogwarts on this level. You do a nice job without overdoing it. I like the relationship between Harry and Ellen that you are developing. She needs a bit more in her character. Right now she's a bit thin, but your Summer visistation chapters should give you ample opportunity to flesh her character out.
  
  Looking forward to more~Jim

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  (#) Cateagle 2006-12-01 11:01:31 AM

  Laughs Ah, at least one good guy paid attention to the handbook for TOG (The Other Guy). I think this is going to get very interesting when Riddle finds out that the diary is missing and then realizes that all of his horocruxes are gone. I would not want to be a DE when that happens.

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