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The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, Harry faces his betrothal -- and Voldemort.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Dobby, Harry, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/12/06 - Updated: 2006/12/06 - 3266 words

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  (#) sparky40sw 2006-12-06 05:22:44 AM

  now that is a heck of a chapter - from the calm and beauty of young love to the totally appropriate response toa terrorist attack - very good.
  thanks for sharing this great story.

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  (#) jbern 2006-12-06 05:27:33 AM

  An interesting chapter. Nice focus on Harry and Ellen. Voldemort almost seems and afterthought. Very nice read. Jim

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  (#) Skoell 2006-12-06 05:33:12 AM

  nice chapter!
  i liked the end especially

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  (#) smargden_2005 2006-12-06 05:35:25 AM

  Thank you for the update - BUT
  what was it - onelu one mor chapter -
  I say there is a lot och years left in school - It's 7 year there.
  - It's realy god to read your stuf - And yesterdat I found some more (where I neaded to confirm I'm old. - Smiling -
  - Ok - se your update when it come.
  And thank you for ALL the god storys of yours.
  /Bill

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  (#) BJH 2006-12-06 05:58:09 AM

  I LOVED the Monty Python reference even if Lily et al didn't get it yet.
  
  The twin lightning bolts were an interesting way to counter an un-hidable curse scar.
  
  And using the Dark mark to kill dark wizards is a neat touch. Now will a one-armed Voldie be able to call any remaining DE's? Or were they all killed with these twelve?
  
  BJH

  Author's response

  Just think of the shock to Voldie's system, losing his arm like that. Most DE's are gone.
  
  "T"

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  (#) Treck 2006-12-06 06:12:09 AM

  Now thats a hell of a place to end the chapter Doc.

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  (#) Mayjest 2006-12-06 06:43:09 AM

  Yay! Tommy boy's back for an episode, and got decimated! Classic. I'm curious about Crouch favouring the couple as well. Has Junior graduated yet? I don't remember him being mentioned so far...

  Author's response

  Crouch Junior would be three years younger than Harry, James, and Lily
  
  "T"

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-12-06 06:53:00 AM

  Armless dork lord... I love it. Was it all Death Eaters world wide that died or just those at Diagion Alley. I also love Harry's get up.

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  (#) Nightwing509 2006-12-06 07:03:29 AM

  I liked how you had Harry defeat Voldemort & his followers.

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  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-12-06 08:29:06 AM

  Harry's getting married! I have to go back an re-read the earlier chapters, I thought Ellen was someone else's mother.
  
  Nice ending. Voldemort gets his ass kicked again. He's the sort of psycho who will keep coming back for more. Unfortunately, he's the sort of intelligent psycho who will try different things each time.
  
  Nice story. Wonder if the Pucey (sp?) think will cause problems back at Hogwarts?
  
  Thanks for creating it.
  
  Tom A.

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