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• Sets of Three, They Say...

  (#) duckapple 2006-12-06

  you ever amaze me.
  Let's make some more babies.

• Sets of Three, They Say...

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-06

  you are good at keeping promises. score one point for you.
  
  Pete sat up, and looked over at Meg in the bed beside him. The bed was beside him, pervs, not Meg. your humor again. i love it.
  
  Meg watched his lips, and put her arm out, looking for words, but she didn't know any this time. This time, she was speechless... the way you worded that was perfect.
  
  "Do you see these hands? They're doing this because of you. They know what they know now, because of what I thought you were teaching me." gah. i loved that. i think that dialog is fantastic and it proves how far patrick was/is willing to go for her.
  
  the way you end your chapters makes me weak in the knees. He was singing, and even though she couldn't hear him, she could feel him. It wasn't enough. It would never be enough. major kudos to patrick for being a fucking genius. i knew this was going to be in this chapter, but i didn't envision it like this. it was a million times better than what my imagination came up with.
  
  i think you hit the nail on the head with this one, pretty spice. take a rating point.

• Sets of Three, They Say...

  (#) danceislife 2006-12-06

  okay so I seriously got teary eyed at the end. Beautifully written ending. Sigh...

• Sets of Three, They Say...

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-07

  He lifted his hands. Why was he doing this for her?"Do you see these hands? They're doing this because of you. They know what they know now, because of what I thought you were teaching me." She looked at him, amazed. "I spent all of that time learning this for you..." She grabbed his hands, her signature way of interrupting./ -> God, I almost cried. Patrick is so amazing.
  
  I also loved the end. Very emotional. (Thus the rating point.)
  
  Pretty Spice, this chapter was one of the best.
  
  DoJHi5

• Sets of Three, They Say...

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-07

  Only you know why I have the biggest goofiest smile smacked over my face at this moment.
  
  Thank you.
  x

  Author's response

  anything for you, my katy.
  
  i hope i did it justice...

• Sets of Three, They Say...

  (#) LOVELA 2006-12-07

  Ohhhh that was so good. This is my favorite Patrick character out of all of the stories. He's so human, it's unbearable. I love the ending as well. You should have no worries about this chapter because it was glorious.
  
  You deserve this: SMOOCHES!!!

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