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The Ends of the Story

The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the end of the story.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Harry, Hermione, James, Lily, Luna, Lupin, Sirius, Tonks, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/12/07 - Updated: 2006/12/07 - 3984 words

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  (#) Nautilus 2006-12-07 05:04:46 AM

  oh.. this was brilliant. what are you planning to do now.
  
  Have you read "the girl who lived" by SilverAegis. i love that story. its a real pity that the author has given up on it...
  
  if there is anyone, i would like to re-write the story, or post up their own version, it would be you. please do consider it, if you haven't read the story, i recommend you do, its simply brilliant, though i am sure there are factors that you could add to it...
  
  i really hope that you take it up, regardless, i hope to see another story up soon. congrats again, this has been a enjoyable read...

  Author's response

  That is a good story, and it would have been nice if it were finished. I need to finish 'Re-Ordered' and then get to work on my non-fiction.
  
  "T"

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  (#) banner 2006-12-07 05:55:57 AM

  I love a happy ending.

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  (#) sparky40sw 2006-12-07 06:03:50 AM

  I enjoyed every word - a really wonderful story, self consistent, thought provoking, entertaining and an example of what a skilled writer can do with a cliche to make it come alive.
  thanks for sharing and warmest regards

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  (#) kcgx23 2006-12-07 06:20:19 AM

  Fabulous story, I loved it.

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  (#) misslexire 2006-12-07 06:30:00 AM

  I have to say, I'm very fond of my Harry/hermione ship, but you did a great job with this story. The plot was interesting, the characters were great. Fantastic job!

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  (#) patronus 2006-12-07 06:36:00 AM

  This was exelent!!

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  (#) looneylupinsrevenge 2006-12-07 06:45:18 AM

  Great job on the story, must say I have really enjoyed reading this one. I look forwards too seeing many other great stories from you in the future as it is sure that you have a talent for writing.
  
  looneylupinsrevenge.

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  (#) kellypassion 2006-12-07 06:56:14 AM

  I give it to you I feel in love with the story and how Harry lived through it well done

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-07 07:17:48 AM

  Great ending. Harry obviously was able to live a long and fulfilling life after killing Voldemort at such a young age. I really liked this story.
  
  So what's next?

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  (#) BJH 2006-12-07 07:19:49 AM

  All I can really say is that it ended too soon. I know you have other stories in process - since I'm reading them - but I can't help but think that this one deserved to be longer. Maybe build through their second year with a more climactic final fight over the summer. Have V make himself a silver arm or something.
  
  It was one of your best works and a unique twist to the time-travel idea. Very well done.
  
  BJH
  
  PS How about a short epilogue showing the two sets of characters, James, Lily, Hermione, Luna, Remus and Tonks meeting up in the afterlife and discussing their lives and how long Harry has left to live?

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