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by AnnF 5 Reviews

Second Chapter

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Harry, Hermione - Published: 2006/12/07 - Updated: 2006/12/07 - 648 words

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  • Desperate Measure

    (#) banner 2006-12-07 02:13:54 PM

    Another interesting beginning. This looks good.
  • Desperate Measure

    (#) JBern 2006-12-07 02:35:05 PM

    Really enjoy your other story. Will be interesting to see where you take it. It sounds like he isn't that much older than a 7th year at this point. Sounds like his whole body can actaully go back instead of the overused 'spirit merge'. You also buck tradition by not having the whole thing transpire in the first chapter. Bravo for that alone.~Jim
  • Desperate Measure

    (#) DavidMPotter 2006-12-07 06:22:59 PM

    Good start! Keep up the good work
  • Desperate Measure

    (#) Alorkin 2006-12-08 08:50:12 AM

    This is a good, if confusing beginning to what promises to be a great story. The aftermath of war is always ugly. I've been in too many of tham.
    I take it, Harry is planning to go back andcorrect this before it caan happen. Something maakes me think the shipment of lead will be used to form a shielded area in which Harry can carry out his experiment without hurting anyone else.
    I look forward to the next page of 'Desperate Measures'. Alorkin
  • Desperate Measure

    (#) maidros 2007-02-20 06:08:24 AM

    I had a laugh picturing a radioactive Dudley. And Dumbledore seems to have a habit of obliviating people in many stories.

    I hope we can get to know who/what else has survived the war. Keep up the good work.
    Regards,
    Maidros

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