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Clenched Fists

by paua_dragon 1 Reviews

a one shot i wrote one day

Category: Mystery - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2006/12/09 - Updated: 2006/12/10 - 325 words - Complete

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  • Clenched Fists

    (#) MarkPoa 2007-02-02 05:48:16 PM

    As a short character study piece, I thought it was pretty good. One way to improve it is to emphasize the helplessness or confusion of the main character more... though I'm not sure how'd you'd show that. Leaving it open-ended like this gives a good effect.

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