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• Unloved

  (#) kirayasha 2007-02-20

  Not bad, although, you have a lot of grammar mistakes, but they're easily fixed. You should also fix the "Jet" to a "Yet" as it was a bit confusing at first until I realized it was a typo. ^^;

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