(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-10so this is a little weird, but i get to review your writing! hehe. love it. this is awesome, because i get ideas from your writing, and i dont have to be as creative. and i kinda feel bad cause i only did 800 something words, but oh wells. love it. update soon so i can too :]
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-11First of all, cowpatty is a hell of a username for the both of you. I’m so digging your scene. (Ha ha… sounds like something Pete might say.)
I found that Emily had been trying to get my attention and that I was staring right at Pete's crotch without realizing it. -> Please, Evie. Everyone realized it but you… ;)
Nice intro chappie. I like how the last thing Evie says is the overall topic of the story.
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