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Tonight the headphones will deliver you.

by jessiearei 3 Reviews

Kadence has known the boys since she was 5. But one of the boys has a secret. Will Kadence ever know the secret or will she lose her boys forever first? Read more to find out.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] [V] [X] - Published: 2006/12/14 - Updated: 2006/12/14 - 1234 words

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  • This Curse on Your Lips

    (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14 01:20:24 PM

    Not only do I review, I also rated this because I think it's a promising start! :)

    I like the multiple perspectives and the "action" that sets the story off. It's interesting to have Patrick being the "bolder" one (he dated the girl for a while) while Pete didn't have the guts to tell her how he feels/ felt about her. I'll never listen to "Grand Theft Autumn" the same again. ;) Especially funny, since Patrick's singing the words...

    Update soon, this is going on my alerts. You may love me forever now. ;)

    Author's response

    Yay!! Thank you so much for the review!!! I will love you forever now!! haha. I thought i'd take make a new perspective of patrick. haha. and Pete wont be as cocky as usual, he's gonna be shy. thanks for the rating too!
  • This Curse on Your Lips

    (#) kissxthexbullet 2006-12-14 01:54:03 PM

    Okay, I'm reveiwing.
    Not for love... but that would be a bonus =]
    I really like the story.
    You should keep going. Maybe if I review again, I'll get another chapter.
    Yes? Yes?
    .....Yes?

    Author's response

    yes!! i love you too!!
    yess! im bout to post another chapter!
    this story is gonna be my new baby!
    for sure! haha
  • This Curse on Your Lips

    (#) itainohime 2007-02-14 07:51:51 AM

    Do not state which character's POV you are writing from in the text of the story.

    Author's response

    I change POV's because i have trouble writing certain things in certain POV's. I do it for a reason. But thanks anyway.

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