(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14Not only do I review, I also rated this because I think it's a promising start! :)
I like the multiple perspectives and the "action" that sets the story off. It's interesting to have Patrick being the "bolder" one (he dated the girl for a while) while Pete didn't have the guts to tell her how he feels/ felt about her. I'll never listen to "Grand Theft Autumn" the same again. ;) Especially funny, since Patrick's singing the words...
Update soon, this is going on my alerts. You may love me forever now. ;)
Author's responseYay!! Thank you so much for the review!!! I will love you forever now!! haha. I thought i'd take make a new perspective of patrick. haha. and Pete wont be as cocky as usual, he's gonna be shy. thanks for the rating too!
(#) kissxthexbullet 2006-12-14Okay, I'm reveiwing.
Not for love... but that would be a bonus =]
I really like the story.
You should keep going. Maybe if I review again, I'll get another chapter.
Author's responseyes!! i love you too!!
yess! im bout to post another chapter!
this story is gonna be my new baby!
for sure! haha
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