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The Best Part Of Believe Is The Lie.

by jessiearei 3 Reviews

Things get heated at the apartment...

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006/12/14 - Updated: 2006/12/15 - 1413 words

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  • This Curse on Your Lips

    (#) GwenMerlon 2006-12-14 11:48:48 PM

    Okay, I kind-of love this story, you you need to write more fast! I loved the shot bit. ;)

    Author's response

    hehe i pretty much love that part! haha tis amazing!!
    thanks for the review!
  • This Curse on Your Lips

    (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-16 04:13:34 AM

    FG to the review section, please! FG to the review section!...

    GET YOUR LAZY ASS TO THE REVIEW SECTION, FROSTEDGLASS!!!

    Hello. Here I am...

    "Zacky-Poo" -> Ha ha. ;)

    I love how Pete gives Zacky-Poo a piece of his mind over the phone. I never liked Pete Wentz more. :)

    Pete pretending to have helped cleaning up the apartment. -> HA HA. Plonkily, dunkely, neighbor.

    I love the fact that they played Monopoly. I had them play that boardgame in one of my stories as well because I love it so much.

    I laughed out loud about Kade asking Pete if he hitched a tent when she did that shot. I like boys in awkward situations. Especially when they're sexual...

    Just keep on producing funny fic like this chapter and I'll keep on reviewing.

    Take a goddamn rating point, you show-off... ;)

    Author's response

    hehe. i had to make pete a little cocky. haha. I love monopoly! hehe I was laughing while i was typing the part about pitching a tent! my dad just stared at me like I was crazy! haha point taken! haha.
  • This Curse on Your Lips

    (#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2006-12-16 06:26:48 AM

    haha class story lovin it so far so plz update!

    Author's response

    haha yay!
    will do. prolly monday night.
    im really busy this weekend.

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