- you spelled Hayley wrong, its Haily or Hailey. it little bit confusing. for the upcomeing chapters please be a little bit more descritive and explainitory. I think that you could make the chapter a little longer. Very Glad that somebody wrote an American Dragon fic. i'm working on one, but it totally sucks. Your story is really interesting and sounds (from what i've read) very good and i can't wait for the next chapter(s)
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