- Totally not expecting the mustard HAHAHAH. Nosey's such a party pooper eh? Like frig!
This was a good alternative ending even though it was short. Maybe it's just me being used to reading crazy long stories but, I would of liked more details in their surroundings. I got that it was night time which was great, but afterwards when he found the box Delilah left him, I had to tell myself that they had gone back inside.
Calling 1234567890 "Hello? HELLO?" Hangs up
I'm weird, you'll get used to it. LOL
Hope to read more stories from you. Take Care.
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