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The runner

by JoelFight 2 Reviews

Poetry

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/12/23 - Updated: 2006/12/24 - 126 words - Complete

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  • The runner

    (#) BenjisRiotGirl79 2006-12-23 08:24:39 PM

    AWESOME
  • The runner

    (#) MarkPoa 2007-01-11 10:30:42 PM

    I liked this one. The technical aspects (spelling, editing) could still be improved, but I think the emotion you were trying to convey shone through: the anger, the frustration, the shame, and the player-mentality. Good job.

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