(#) the-Ordinary 2007-01-06This was a very enjoyable read. I love how you tied Katara's memories of her mother, making her hairstyle sentimental.
Favorite part: Tent flap slamming,
Author's responseThanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Everybody is attached to something I guess. Hair just seemed to suit Katara best.
- A nice little Katara introspection piece. It was particularly good that you remembered to direct us to the most important influence in Katara's life - her late mother.
I loved your description of the salon lady too! :-D
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
Author's responseLucky seven! I'm glad you enjoyed it, Katara needs alittle more introspection in her life.
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