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A Fair and Reasonable Price

Draco is sent to a store, and makes an impulse buy. Crossover with CLAMP's xxxHOLIC

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Crossover, Drama - Characters: Draco - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2005/08/06 - Updated: 2005/08/06 - 1292 words - Complete

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• A Fair and Reasonable Price

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-23 04:12:26 PM

  "He follows the path because he isn't a coward." -- Very expressive. This tells me that Draco feels as though he has something to prove.
  
  The prefect badge? I can see Draco feeling attached to that.

• A Fair and Reasonable Price

  (#) Skyepie 2007-09-23 04:06:42 AM

  It's certainly really interesting. I can see this happening. A bit of problem with the flow though, I can't quite imagine Watanuki and Yuuko conversing in English. Yuuko maybe, but not Watanuki and certainly not to each other. If Draco understanding them is because of black Mokona's presence, it would've been a little clearer to make an observation of it.
  
  Other than that a really original read :) So, what did Draco get in return for his payment in the end?

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