Cloud finds Reno in an alley, and suspicions rise and falter
I found Cloud's characterisation a bit shakey (Why would he attack Reno when Reno is only smoking a cigarette without attacking him first?) but overall the story was very good.
I loved the ending, and I loved how you portreyed their getting together, how Cloud became a bit... in love with? addicted to? Reno. Thank you for writing it!
Author's responseWell, because Reno was still under orders to search for Cloud.
I know, the entire story is a little shaky, but thank you for reviewing it and you kind words. And you're welcome :) haha
- This was... upsetting, but in a good way, you know? You rarely see the more violent, sadistic side of Reno in fic. Awesome job. This one made me think really hard.
Author's responsethank you, I'm glad it stuck with you and made you think after you read it.