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Strictly Business

Cloud finds Reno in an alley, and suspicions rise and falter

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters: Cloud Strife, Reno - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2006/12/26 - Updated: 2006/12/26 - 2301 words - Complete

Reviews

• Strictly Business

  (#) RenoTurk 2006-12-27 03:48:17 AM

  OMG what an ending! You really did a good job there.

• Strictly Business

  (#) Squallfan 2006-12-27 04:01:12 AM

  Wow, that was amazing. I really have no other words to describe it. Great work.

• Strictly Business

  (#) kira_k 2006-12-27 02:22:27 PM

  Hi,
  
  I found Cloud's characterisation a bit shakey (Why would he attack Reno when Reno is only smoking a cigarette without attacking him first?) but overall the story was very good.
  
  I loved the ending, and I loved how you portreyed their getting together, how Cloud became a bit... in love with? addicted to? Reno. Thank you for writing it!

  Author's response

  Well, because Reno was still under orders to search for Cloud.
  
  I know, the entire story is a little shaky, but thank you for reviewing it and you kind words. And you're welcome :) haha

• Strictly Business

  (#) Katya 2006-12-28 05:58:57 PM

  This was... upsetting, but in a good way, you know? You rarely see the more violent, sadistic side of Reno in fic. Awesome job. This one made me think really hard.

  Author's response

  thank you, I'm glad it stuck with you and made you think after you read it.

• Strictly Business

  (#) 101010hd 2007-05-28 05:13:24 PM

  well...i've never seen reno act like that before!!!

• Strictly Business

  (#) Aimedmischief 2007-11-15 01:30:10 PM

  Holy shit. This story is fantastic! gapes

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