(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2006-12-29Much love. And don't feel too bad about him taking your hoodie. Like Matt Good from From First To Last, I hung out with him once with my solid black chucks then the next day they performed and look who had my shoes. I chewed him out about it and he offered to buy me some other shoes. Gotta love the kid. Meanwhile, I do adore. Please keep it up.
- Aww, that was cute! I luff Brendon, and even though he took your hoodie...you have to admit he did look good in it. Haha, I saw that show, They were at Starland for me.
Cute story, hope you continue it...just a little constructive critisism (If I even spelled that right) Try putting all your charactures actions in past tense, like he opened the door not he opens the door. I dunno, it just sounds better. But im no story writer.
Much luff, good luck on continuing your story.
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