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I'm Sorry Mama
13 ReviewsHe hasn't called you that in a long time, not since he was small, since he was a child, since he was innocent.
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I'm Sorry Mama
(#) Clinga 2007-01-02 04:22:57 AM
wow. that was sad,but liked it!! ;)Author's response
awww, thank you. people always tell me it was sad or they cried and it makes me feel bad. aha. -
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(#) Cerediwen 2007-01-02 04:59:43 AM
That...that was amazing. That was brilliant and it doesn't need any work at all! Don't put yourself down like that it was AWESOME!Author's response
hmm. i don't know. usually, when i have a lot of doubt in myself, i go away and end up creating something better. but well, you people all seem to like it, so you know. thanks ;]]. -
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(#) Silvana 2007-01-02 11:12:55 AM
That...was...brilliant. Yeah, I think once you put taunt instead of taut but that's something so minor . It's an amazing story.Author's response
that's another one to note. i saw a few mistakes when i read it the other day, so i'll try and remember that one to. thank you, you're to kind. -
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(#) xDisenchantedx 2007-01-02 11:27:39 AM
Hey there. This story was really emotional, and much, MUCH better than most on the site. I really liked it. There are just a few things I'm unsure about, but that might just be me. I was unsure of Gerard and Mikey's ages in the story, if they were teenagers or adults. Also I wasn't completely sure what was going to bring the boys harm or the thing about the two years... I mean, I have ideas but it wasn't completely clear. But that's alright, because that's what gave the story an element of mystery, I suppose. I like the use of second person-ish, and I honestly don't think you should rewrite it or write a sequel because I liked it this way. You're really a very good writer. So I hope to see more from you, and I will be sure to put this on my favorites list!
-Bee, xDisenchantedxAuthor's response
oh jeez. aha. thanks ;]]. i re-read through this a while ago [night i posted it actually] and even i got a bit confussed, that's why i'm going to re-write it. plus that and the dreadful spelling mistakes. thanks again, you're lovely. -
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(#) xDisenchantedx 2007-01-02 12:49:56 PM
Oh my goodness. That was amazing. That was SO powerful, the emotion and the-.... regret, and pain, it made me want to read on, and it made me cry. The details that you add are so vague, and hint at the plot without actually giving it all away. I love that. You are truly gifted at writing, and it really shows with this piece. Great job, keep up the good work.
~ The overly modest half of xDisenchantedx. -
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(#) xDisenchantedx 2007-01-02 12:50:04 PM
Oh my goodness. That was amazing. That was SO powerful, the emotion and the-.... regret, and pain, it made me want to read on, and it made me cry. The details that you add are so vague, and hint at the plot without actually giving it all away. I love that. You are truly gifted at writing, and it really shows with this piece. Great job, keep up the good work.
~ The overly modest half of xDisenchantedx. -
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(#) xDisenchantedx 2007-01-02 12:50:05 PM
Oh my goodness. That was amazing. That was SO powerful, the emotion and the-.... regret, and pain, it made me want to read on, and it made me cry. The details that you add are so vague, and hint at the plot without actually giving it all away. I love that. You are truly gifted at writing, and it really shows with this piece. Great job, keep up the good work.
~ The overly modest half of xDisenchantedx.Author's response
aha. wow, thanks for that. i have no idea what exactly it is about his story that people like so much, lmao. i think maybe it's that none have been told from this point of view or some shit like that, i don't know. grr. lol. -
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(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-01-02 01:38:00 PM
woah!!! I'm actually almost speechless, you are an INCREDIBLE writer!!! I'm just....so amazed!!!! woah.........:)Author's response
awwww, thank you thisssssssssss much. reviews like that make me embarrassed ;]], but i've never really known how to take a complimant. glad you liked it. -
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(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-01-02 04:58:53 PM
Oh. My. God. This was so freaking original!!! I feel really bad saying this, but...incest is hot. And, this story made me cry. But in a good way. Urgh. I loved this. Please write more.Author's response
aha. that's okay, don't tell anyone but, the other day when i re-read it ... i kinda started feeling a little 'sad' myself, so you're not alone. a lot of people have told me they cried as well. aha, yeah well, you only think it's hot, i wrote about it, so i think i'll go to hell before you :P. thanks for the review, glad you like my shit. -
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(#) kirsty 2007-03-26 10:02:19 AM
THAT WAS TRUELY AWESOME. love it. wish i could qrite like that. perfectly thought out. 10/10