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Chapter Four

Chapter Four

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2007/01/02 - Updated: 2007/01/02 - 704 words

Reviews

• I don't think you're my drug.

  (#) Frenchie189 2007-01-02 02:03:11 PM

  I love it.. Oh my gosh, I'm glad I put it in my alerts

  Author's response

  Lol, Im glad also. Quick read! Lol, thanks. =D

• I don't think you're my drug.

  (#) prettypoizon 2007-01-02 03:46:16 PM

  You left it THERE?! =o
  
  Talk about queen of suspense!

  Author's response

  BWAHHAAAAAAAAAA.
  That is so going on my profile. 'Queen of suspense...'

• I don't think you're my drug.

  (#) MusicxisxHearts 2007-01-02 06:38:06 PM

  I love how you take the story from being hilarious to dead serious in just a short space of writing. Very nice work indeed.

  Author's response

  I think that's what will happen through the story. One part will be sad/angst/emotional, then it will go to humor/happy/fun. Yay. Thanks for boosting my review numbers! Much appreciated. xx

• I don't think you're my drug.

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-03 12:41:10 AM

  Thank you, Alex...
  
  ;)
  
  Totally loved these:
  
  1)/My life was a fucking mess, and even people that I had only just met already looked down on me./ -> Self-doubts. Plus, she's not really the hard, I-don't-need-anybody-else kind of person that she seemed to be/ wants (?) to be at first. Very human. Very likable. Very good. :)
  
  As the water droplets fell from the shower head, I felt my barrier to emotion go with it. My eyes glazed over, -> Hello, AMBIANCE! Sweet phrasing. Also very realistic situation.
  
  Yeah, yeah... take the point. But don't brag... ;)

  Author's response

  I decided to do an ambiantic [Is that even a word?] chapter. I seem to write with ambiance better than anything else, so its what im sticking with. Whereas the funny parts come in small doses. You are amazing at HILARIOUS stuff, but im kinda more subtle funny. Its pathetic really. HAAA. But anyway, thanks for the review. Yours always make me smile, they are nice and long. x] xx

• I don't think you're my drug.

  (#) riaryder 2007-01-03 09:58:19 AM

  Nice chapter. Yank up the suspense.
  Nothing I like more than a totally screwed up chicklet.
  Do update soon, lady xx

  Author's response

  Suspense is my middle name. Ha.
  Thanks for the review darlinnggg.

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