Categories > Celebrities > Panic! At The Disco > Trust Me, Please?
Do You See What I See?
7 ReviewsIs the bud of romance between Brendon and Alice blooming, or starting to wilt?
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Trust Me, Please?
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2007-01-04 07:51:31 AM
I like. I'm getting confused in some parts but I do like it.Author's response
Oh dear. Confusing? If you need to, email me at meeniemoe@gmail.com and I'll be happy to answer any questions-- I check my email daily. -
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(#) rori795 2007-01-05 07:22:22 PM
yay! this update just made my shitty day become so much better. enjoy your trip. can't wait for your next update. I hope she says yes, but I have a bad feeling that she won't.Author's response
Aww, I'm sorry about your shitty day, hon. I hope everything got better though. -
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(#) poisonedhalo 2007-01-07 04:54:51 AM
i like this bluntness and i LOVE how u write jon. its hilariousAuthor's response
Jon was hilariously fun to write. I putter around with his character too much, I think...lol. Thanks for reading & reviewing. :D -
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(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-09 04:18:52 AM
more cutetacular-ness ha! my own word!
and i agree..b-den does look odd w/ eyeliner, even if i happen to think that's the hottest thing ever (guys who wear it)he's like too pretty for it...does that make sense?Author's response
Haha...niiice new word. If there's anyone who's too pretty for makeup, (or is just prettier using it) is definitely Ryan...lol. It's nice to know my fanfic is cute. :D Thanks for reviewing! xoxo -
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(#) Sedated_Passion 2007-04-09 06:55:53 PM
Very cute indeed. I'm starting to like Jon as well! :) Although, I am a little disappointed by the 'tour' idea, because I think it gets overdone a lot. HOWEVER! I will keep an open mind, because I'm sure I'm about to be amazed.
Oh, and the line: "Sweetie, you got me all wrong"... MELTED MY HEART GIRL!
Way to go! On with the reading! -
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(#) GAClive 2011-03-24 12:48:44 PM
this is really cute so far! But I can't help but wonder who Jon was playing DnD with... it's sorta a group game that involves acting out characters... (don't ask me how I know that...) Now World of Warcraft is something he can play on his own.