Sheena confides in an old friend and explains what's currently pulling her down. Her Highness Hairball is appalled about the lack of attention we have been paying to her and decides to make a point...
- Aw, poor Sheena. How can I feel sorry for someone who's married to the biscuit?
'Got plink?' Oh I laughed my ass off at that one.
And Hedwig is just comedy genius.
Forgive me for rating this funny despite poor Sheena's suffering, because it is and you are xx
Author's responseI know, let's blame Sheena. It's her fault. ;)
Thanks for the point. I had difficulties making this chapter funny because Sheena's talking about something more serious. Hedwig is pretty plinky, I guess. :)
(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-04 06:03:19 AMfirst of all--
I loved this chapter. I think I just love Sheena a whole bunch.
Are we supposed to not know who Sheena was talking to? (ie: it doesn't matter its just a member of fob) 'cause I definitly don't think it was Pete.
It's nice to see reinforcment that Sheena still hearts Patrick.
Kylene was tolerable this chapter--and was being nice to Hedwig? was this a fluke? lol
zomg! hug thankyou!! for the footnote. i heart you forever times a gazillion.
(and random little side note unrelated to your story: someone suggested pete and molly get together. dies)
-your friendly neighborhood Bridget
Author's responseThank you for giving me reassurance about the chapter. (I hope) it's not gonna get all that serious, after all this story is supposed to me my comedic release. ;)
Nope, you are not supposed to know who. ;) Yes, it just matters that it's a member of FOB. We'll see how I can continue the story with the guys' (regular) appearances without giving too much away. Oh well, if somebody finds out it's gonna be alright, too.
Yes, Kylene was tolerbale in this chapter. Because she got so say like what? Two sentences?
You are welcome. I really love your story. I read that Molly-Pete review and was literally saying "Yeah, right." out loud. ;)
Thanks for your meaningful reviews and the little chick-chat. :)
(#) rawrlittledino 2007-01-04 09:56:59 AMNOOOO.
You can't use sheep milk, I say so. Sheeps have cool coats.
And this again, was an amazing chapter. I love this story, and hedwig makes me laugh. But i need to know who the 'visitor' was. Or else. GRR.
P.S-It's nice that you dedicated this to Ev and Aiden. =]
Author's responseSorry about that. Somehow I knew I would offend somebody. It's just slightly surprising that it wasn't Bush this time.
Hedwig thanks you for the praise. There will be more of her in the next chapter. Bring on the "or else". ;)
Thanks. I can be nice sometimes. Just don't get used to it. So where's your update?
- Dude. Who the hell was the visitor? Why the secret? I demand to know!
WHOA! That was so not nice!? Uh oh. The mystery has made nice spice not so nice. DUN DUN DUN.
Author's responseHow would I know? Sheena didn't mention his name, dude.
Stop turning me on...
- Is it wrong to be jealous of a chapter being dedicated to Aiden and Evie? Having a namesake just isn't enough for me. I need more!
AANNNNNDDD, I'm over it. Cute little chappie, miss Alex. But who was her mysterious visitor? I have an idea, but I don't want to sound stupid...er.
Author's responseNext chapter goes out to you. Cos I kiss ass like that.