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A Birthday Surprise for You
1 reviewKantarou wanted haruka to celebrate his birthday with but haruka declined........sorry...its my first fiction..^_^;
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A Birthday Surprise for You
(#) 101010hd 2007-06-04
it was a good story, but you are having some problems with the tense of the story. you seem like you don't like to stray from the root word. i hope that this review has helped you!
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