Archie has been poisoned and atlanta needs to save him
by the way your story says "herry put atlanta on the couch," that was really quick. You should put more effort into this story. liek amybe tell about how Atlanta got the water. What the others did when they got Cronus. Did they defeat him? What happens next?
(#) Ace_Fan_12 2007-01-06 03:52:06 PM
I don't wanan be ruid or anything but I agree with Twinklestar. You gotta put a bit more detail in it! But the idea of the story is good! It would be better with more detail.
(#) Mrs-Jay 2007-01-06 06:08:13 PM
Sorry but I have to agree with twiinklestar. But you said that you were in a hurry so I hope theres more were it came from ^_^
its good but dunt mean to ruin yur plans for this story, but isnt archie immune?
i prabably sound dumb...maybe its a poison making him non-immune? lol weird guess but ya.