(#) Dragonshadow 2007-01-09you write some very good stories, but with this one i think you went around in circles in several chapters. you brought up the same conversation multiple times in one chapter alone. plus i felt that you described the gringotts deal as if it was their first time there, when they had been going there for seven years. i truly believe that this story could have been done better in comparison to your other titles.
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