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Chapter seven

by wimvincken 1 Reviews

It does not go well with Harry Potter. In order to increase Harry's magical power, Dumbledore infects Harry and two girls with a disease. And his power surges.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Lupin, Molly Weasley, Professor McGonagall, Ron, Sirius, Snape, Tom Riddle, Voldemort - Warnings: [X] [Y] - Published: 2007/01/08 - Updated: 2007/01/08 - 3805 words

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  • Magical triplet

    (#) Dragonshadow 2007-01-09 12:29:04 AM

    you write some very good stories, but with this one i think you went around in circles in several chapters. you brought up the same conversation multiple times in one chapter alone. plus i felt that you described the gringotts deal as if it was their first time there, when they had been going there for seven years. i truly believe that this story could have been done better in comparison to your other titles.

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