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Confusion: Freeverse

A poem on love's confusion. I have another one titled "Confusion" which was written around the same time as this one, but this one was written in freeverse.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/09 - Updated: 2007/01/09 - 234 words - Complete

Reviews

• Confusion: Freeverse

  (#) fruit_addict 2007-01-26 10:24:31 AM

  wow. Sure summed up how I feel. Like I said on my review on your other poem I think the dot dot dot didn't completely fit in.

  Author's response

  Thanks. As for the ellipsis, I don't know how you felt it didn't fit in, but I'll see about their use in my future poems. :)

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