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My Open Door

When you love someone completely, you feel like nothing is closed to you. I return reviews!

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/11 - Updated: 2007/01/12 - 98 words - Complete

Reviews

• My Open Door

  (#) pinkfroggie06 2007-01-14 02:49:57 PM

  Wow! I wish that I wrote that. You should think about getting that published. It's great, magnificent.
  Write more like that!

  Author's response

  Thank you!

• My Open Door

  (#) fruit_addict 2007-04-04 07:58:48 PM

  I really liked this poem. It is so cool. One thing though is that the line 'You're my open door' didn't seem to fit with the rythm. Maybe 'You are my open door' would work. But you might have done that intentionaly.

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