Having a history like theirs could be troublesome at times, in Shennille's opinion. Fic trade done for kelseyANNE centering around her OC Shennille
**NOTE** look at the WARNING people. If you do...
(#) Mrs-Jay 2007-01-12 01:51:28 PM
I can't believe you did that to Atlanta!
I guess... it was orginal... a-and that girl couldn't have been OOC because she is an OC... but Archie...
PS; sorry if I sound mean, I'm just not a big fan of AxAnyone else stories
(#) JessieLD746 2007-01-12 01:52:43 PM
sniffs Yu broke my heart. Making Archie not have sex with Atlanta and then say that he doesn't want to be with her because he thought it would never work out. Seriously! Broke my heart. It was still really cute though! And, ya, still loved it!
(#) Jessi_Girl9 2007-01-12 02:29:09 PM
That was really good, and great twist. Heh, I guess Atlanta will have to look for someone else :P
It was really great, and I can't wait to see more stories from you!
(#) hachoo 2007-01-12 04:27:37 PM
interesting story, i just watched troy. i like how it's helen and achilles descendents... it's pretty ironic.
(#) Iron Maiden fan 2007-01-12 05:42:16 PM
that story was awsome! I may not be a fan of the whole A/OC thing but thanks 2 u I am u did a great job
cute but not AxA =(. I would have liked it better if Archie still did love Atlanta, but oh well. good story!
(#) classofthetitans_fan 2007-01-13 10:55:10 PM
oops sorry and not logged in. Actually i like the fact it wasnt Atlanta, like teh title. Of history. For once it wasnt A/A which makes it extra great.Not saying i dunt like a/a, just...u know. lol
(#) heyjuliet 2007-01-13 11:01:07 PM
I liked this. I've never read an Archie/OC pairing before, but I think the story worked it out very positively, especially with Archi's ending statement. And please don't take in consideration the comments people say about the Archie/Atlanta betrayel. It's not like this character is going to swoop in and "steal" Archie from Atlanta in the actual show, people! Keep up the good work!
(#) Honeybee 2007-01-15 06:23:54 AM
Again the stuff u write is pure genious (",) i loved that we waited a bit into the story to find out who the guy was... kept the suspense there!!!! lol and i like how the girl is not Atlanta cuz sumtimes people DO fall out of love wen there affection is not returned ;) hee hee it was great... glad to see that u still have it lol
from ur friendly Honeybee :P
(#) ana_pitufina 2007-01-15 07:11:22 PM
wow! I like it =)
i want axa having sex lol
BUT ITS YOUR STORY NOT MINE