John Granger is orphaned when his mother dies in a car accident. It's up to his parents' best friend, a man who has failed to lead a happy life, to raise him. Will a young woman be able to heal the...
- An interesting story - certainly different from the usual HP storyline. The characterisation is first rate - you have made them seem very real, the overly controlling Molly is spot on as this is how I would imagine her to really be at that age. Ron seems a very decent person dealing with real issues, rather than the shallow eating machine that he is usually shown as.
I am particularly impressed with the effect that Harry has on the story despite not being seen.
Keep it up - looking forward to hoe you take it forward.
- I've read this before on other sites and loved it. I've comments on the chapaters as I read them on those other sites. So I'll just take this opportunity to congratulate you on a superb idea that's well written. I'll most definitely be looking to your sequels and/or extensions.