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The Grave

Why so silent? It's probably not what you expect when you think of a grave. Written after the death of a family friend, but it's taken me a while to post. I return reviews

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/14 - Updated: 2007/01/15 - 120 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Grave

  (#) MarkPoa 2007-01-15 08:45:23 AM

  This reads like an old poem... if you were aiming for that, I think you achieved it. Good work. I like the imagery you've used here, and the way you provide a mixture of elements (the rose, thorn, vine, maid, snow and grave) strewn around the stanzas.

• The Grave

  (#) RenoTurk 2007-03-09 03:59:21 PM

  Oh I love graveyards and this is a wonderfully ambient piece. I am adding to my faves!

• The Grave

  (#) masterinfailure 2007-04-20 12:05:36 AM

  i find this beautiful in its simplicity and yet the ambiance the words create behold the complexity of the situation. brava

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