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• Not Looking

  (#) rawrlittledino 2007-01-15

  Patrick needs a good slap.
  And I feel a Pete/Olivia thing happening.

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  (#) jessiearei 2007-01-15

  uh! how could patrick do that to olivia!
  he's a jerk.
  i think olivia and pete should get together!

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  (#) SongbirdFlyAway 2007-01-15

  okay who do you think would win in a catfight ... kyler or mr meatball?
  
  and i really like this story. every chapter is good!

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  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-15

  Grr to Patrick! I can't believe he did that to poor Olivia... But I'm really curious where you're going with this. I mean, there are so many issues that need to be cleared up and I WANT her to be with Patrick, but she /can't/. So frustrating. And who do these voice things think they are, messing with such a sweet love affair? Grr to them as well.
  
  I can't wait for more... I feel you need a point. :)

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  (#) LOVELA 2007-01-15

  Oh my dear Katy. You have done it yet again. This chapter was extremely emotion evoking. I loved it. I really wish you would share your secret to your phenomenal writing.
  
  Miss you like Coffee! Here drink this hands mint mocha over I know you like it. Oh yeah and have one of these too. hands rating point over
  
  SMOOCHES!!!!

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  (#) ZippersOverYou 2007-01-15

  wow, this was beautiful. you know what, I should be thanking you for writing this. Absolutely beautiful. thank you for stopping my headache with words that make my heart ache. ^_^

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  (#) duckapple 2007-01-15

  Katy I must insist that we adopt a pig.

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  (#) riaryder 2007-01-15

  Oh sweet cheese and pickle sandwiches, Katy!
  How can you leave me hanging like that? Thinking bad thoughts about the Hatman?
  Aye, you better update soon lady. Or else. :-)

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  (#) MMMramen 2007-01-15

  I can't believe I almost missed this update. I'm sooo sorry. This chapter brought me to tears. I really thought Patrick would go after her, spill tons of romantic sentiments and there would be make up sex. Instead...I got Pete going after Olivia and Patrick cheating with some unsuspecting girl. But life isn't perfect and I like how this story reflects that. Not everyone gets a verbally inclined Prince on a white horse. This truly was a moving chapter. An I will rate it as such. Miss you, babe. xoxoxoxo

• Not Looking

  (#) MMMramen 2007-01-15

  P.S. I like the cat in the beginning. He/she should be featured more often.

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